tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post1755527281527555859..comments2023-06-09T04:25:11.266-07:00Comments on Going for coffee...: Yearning for Wonderland Writing Contest Entry: LeprechaunsJo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-2211438500811234802012-02-22T19:30:08.173-08:002012-02-22T19:30:08.173-08:00thanks for stopping by my blog and reading my stor...thanks for stopping by my blog and reading my stories Eden. I really appreciate feedback, constructive criticism etc... I'm a newbie!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-89195210949644520482012-02-22T13:19:48.260-08:002012-02-22T13:19:48.260-08:00Oh, I agree! The "We're fairies" wa...Oh, I agree! The "We're fairies" was PERFECT! It made me chuckle...Eden Mabeehttp://manyworldsmanyminds.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-69347597386467945612012-02-21T10:22:58.759-08:002012-02-21T10:22:58.759-08:00Thanks so much Ellen! Appreciate you taking the ti...Thanks so much Ellen! Appreciate you taking the time to read my story and comment. By the way, had a quick look at your blog. Your quilts are absolutely stunning! As a knitter, I know how much work goes into our crafts. Can't wait to see more photos of your handiwork!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-7188285385066994582012-02-21T09:51:59.803-08:002012-02-21T09:51:59.803-08:00I love the image of a tiny little fairy swearing a...I love the image of a tiny little fairy swearing at a little boy. Well done!Ellen S.http://technicolorlilypond.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-33352224251451577122012-02-20T19:58:55.849-08:002012-02-20T19:58:55.849-08:00Thank you Sara! Appreciate your kind comment!Thank you Sara! Appreciate your kind comment!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-82874555067143438332012-02-20T19:56:46.722-08:002012-02-20T19:56:46.722-08:00I giggled and loved it! Well done. :)I giggled and loved it! Well done. :)Sara Leggerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08820846306913790977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-79089259463308986122012-02-20T18:49:55.146-08:002012-02-20T18:49:55.146-08:00Thanks Dee for reading & commenting!Thanks Dee for reading & commenting!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-72945827245907680992012-02-20T18:19:29.571-08:002012-02-20T18:19:29.571-08:00Hehe! "We're fairies dammit!" Love...Hehe! "We're fairies dammit!" Love it!The RambleInnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05782867075487534804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-87857126624420979782012-02-19T18:30:40.113-08:002012-02-19T18:30:40.113-08:00Thank you Steven :)) I always appreciate you readi...Thank you Steven :)) I always appreciate you reading & commenting. 300 words isn't very many, is it? I couldn't quite get to the emotional core of the story so I tried doing something a bit different for me and went for the laugh.Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-87548094426112056132012-02-19T16:49:12.949-08:002012-02-19T16:49:12.949-08:00Very funny Jo-Anne. Enjoyed it, good job.Very funny Jo-Anne. Enjoyed it, good job.Steven Paul Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16674315801239798086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-14639129262601678542012-02-18T20:09:42.342-08:002012-02-18T20:09:42.342-08:00For my very debut fantastical story attempt, snork...For my very debut fantastical story attempt, snorkling is exactly the reaction that I had hoped would be first. :)) Thanks for this challenge Anna. Have really enjoyed reading all the entries and have learned something from each of them.Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-29227572853035860182012-02-18T20:06:52.425-08:002012-02-18T20:06:52.425-08:00Thanks Rebecca :) I wish those kids all had backup...Thanks Rebecca :) I wish those kids all had backup too.Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-39721760694130251482012-02-18T19:59:09.692-08:002012-02-18T19:59:09.692-08:00I snorkled. Thanks for my giggle for the day, Jo-A...I snorkled. Thanks for my giggle for the day, Jo-Anne, and thanks for entering! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09004546178112127604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-28431374412997352952012-02-18T12:42:25.792-08:002012-02-18T12:42:25.792-08:00Cute story! Makes me wish every bullied kid had so...Cute story! Makes me wish every bullied kid had some fairy backup!Becky Fyfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01595020500346331076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-82163414253376061012012-02-16T21:13:20.957-08:002012-02-16T21:13:20.957-08:00Thanks McKenzie. I wasn't able to get to an em...Thanks McKenzie. I wasn't able to get to an emotional centre so I went for the laugh. Appreciate you commenting!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-37397869843864454082012-02-16T21:12:06.870-08:002012-02-16T21:12:06.870-08:00My bow to the first person story telling. Thanks f...My bow to the first person story telling. Thanks for reading it Donna and commenting!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-6859613190409278342012-02-16T21:11:25.347-08:002012-02-16T21:11:25.347-08:00Glad you liked it!Glad you liked it!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-30057867771687853262012-02-16T19:54:59.033-08:002012-02-16T19:54:59.033-08:00That was so cute! Loved the ending. I laughed. :)That was so cute! Loved the ending. I laughed. :)McKenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13428106500950557216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-92143048293061990242012-02-16T13:46:09.147-08:002012-02-16T13:46:09.147-08:00Nice little twist at the end, enjoyed it!Nice little twist at the end, enjoyed it!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-27955936637797559372012-02-16T05:32:15.433-08:002012-02-16T05:32:15.433-08:00Haha - nice work :)Haha - nice work :)SJIHollidayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09395935935929608392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-12749252352233001782012-02-14T06:55:59.000-08:002012-02-14T06:55:59.000-08:00Thanks so much!Thanks so much!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-21040547411582225522012-02-14T05:47:49.182-08:002012-02-14T05:47:49.182-08:00Very funny! I loved the last sentence. :)Very funny! I loved the last sentence. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14441204813159368735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-86766598344250079672012-02-13T22:00:51.074-08:002012-02-13T22:00:51.074-08:00thanks so much Ms. Kern for the generous comment b...thanks so much Ms. Kern for the generous comment but I've read the other entries - so beautiful (and one very funny one!). I'm just glad to have the opportunity to try something challenging...and it really was!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-88246565742258281672012-02-13T20:57:06.454-08:002012-02-13T20:57:06.454-08:00Well, Ms. Winner -- great job! And you very much d...Well, Ms. Winner -- great job! And you very much deserve to be in that winner's circle. Nice light touch, the dialogue between the two boys is very real, and I just love the ending--both of the last two paragraphs made me laugh.Kern Windwraithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16771591425163484238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-68382086853631718032012-02-12T10:57:58.760-08:002012-02-12T10:57:58.760-08:00thanks Daniel! Really appreciate the kind comment...thanks Daniel! Really appreciate the kind comment!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.com