tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post8915661245378172499..comments2023-06-09T04:25:11.266-07:00Comments on Going for coffee...: If I ...Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-73222631773444722832012-01-21T14:28:26.900-08:002012-01-21T14:28:26.900-08:00Jo-Anne, this is so rip-your-heart-out poignant. I...Jo-Anne, this is so rip-your-heart-out poignant. It hits me right where I live--in that great big puddle of doubt and questioning and hope. I have no coherent feedback for you other than to say (a) you need to write more poetry (and believe me, that's not something I say to everyone), and (b) the line "I would have made of chaff and hard shells that cut fingers" is maybe one of my favourite lines ever, and I wish I'd written it.<br /><br />And, yes. You are more than all that.<br /><br />Beautiful.Kern Windwraithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16771591425163484238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-19519450141938487272012-01-19T06:41:17.826-08:002012-01-19T06:41:17.826-08:00This is beautiful!This is beautiful!McKenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13428106500950557216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4192092613796233894.post-67412267264922144212012-01-19T06:19:04.635-08:002012-01-19T06:19:04.635-08:00Lovely!Lovely!Angie Richmondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03427286424394081888noreply@blogger.com