Saturday, December 3, 2011

Five Sentence Fiction - Secrets

“Swear?  Pinkie swear?” Bobbie wasn’t sure exactly what that meant but, even at 6 years old, she understood what Heather needed to hear. “Pinkie swear” Bobbie said solemnly. The two friends crawled out of their hiding place behind the shed at the end of the yard,and gripping each other’s hand, walked slowly back towards the darkened house.

4 comments:

  1. I loved this piece! Reading it reminded me of all the times I did that as a little girl, and the solemn secrecy of the two children was adorable!

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  2. @claire, Hope you see this response. Thank you so much for your comment! Really appreciated you taking the time to read my little story.

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  3. I love what you've done with Secrets! Such a sweet moment between little girls. Nice!!!

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  4. Cute, just how kids think (I think...)
    Kate

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